Tuesday, October 03, 2006
Freelance Comic - The Narrative
Erica Wildwood created the textual thread or narrative for our comic, this was sectioned into 17 roughly equal parts and sent to all members taking part. The following are the contributors' sentences in the page order that they will appear in the comic.
Narrative sentences and opening single panel on the title page. [Erica Wildwood]
1. The moment he opened his eyes he knew something was different. [Ferial Evans]
2. He mustn't keep her waiting. She'd always hated being kept waiting. [Angela Harvey]
3. Following her instructions, he came to a very strange place. [Mark Beesley]
4. At first, he couldn't work out what they were doing. [Annabel Mednick]
5. Then the women went wild. [Andrew Smith]
6. (...) [Mo Galvani]
7. It was like that recurring dream he'd had as a child. [Hilli Thompson]
8. He stopped running when he realised he was lost. [Sally Launder]
9. Thank god for that, he thought as he walked towards it. [Sally & Daniel?]
10. She was there, laughing at him. [Daniel Rounding]
11. He considered his options. [Steve Joyce]
12. He worked fast and furiously. [Borin Van Loon]
13. He wandered lonely as a cloud, thinking, remembering. [David Upson]
14. (...) [Malcolm Moseley]
15. When he got back he couldn't believe what had happened. [Margaret Nelson]
16. And yet, something wasn't quite right. [David Truzzi-Franconi]
17. He sat by the window and watched. [Jason Chapman]
Narrative sentences and opening single panel on the title page. [Erica Wildwood]
1. The moment he opened his eyes he knew something was different. [Ferial Evans]
2. He mustn't keep her waiting. She'd always hated being kept waiting. [Angela Harvey]
3. Following her instructions, he came to a very strange place. [Mark Beesley]
4. At first, he couldn't work out what they were doing. [Annabel Mednick]
5. Then the women went wild. [Andrew Smith]
6. (...) [Mo Galvani]
7. It was like that recurring dream he'd had as a child. [Hilli Thompson]
8. He stopped running when he realised he was lost. [Sally Launder]
9. Thank god for that, he thought as he walked towards it. [Sally & Daniel?]
10. She was there, laughing at him. [Daniel Rounding]
11. He considered his options. [Steve Joyce]
12. He worked fast and furiously. [Borin Van Loon]
13. He wandered lonely as a cloud, thinking, remembering. [David Upson]
14. (...) [Malcolm Moseley]
15. When he got back he couldn't believe what had happened. [Margaret Nelson]
16. And yet, something wasn't quite right. [David Truzzi-Franconi]
17. He sat by the window and watched. [Jason Chapman]
# posted by Andrew S @ 11:14 PM 
